Hi Everyone,
This time I tired much snappy animation with some quick actions. I did this animation in my spare time and in weekends. Please give your comments and critics about the animation. I would be obliged.
This time I tired much snappy animation with some quick actions. I did this animation in my spare time and in weekends. Please give your comments and critics about the animation. I would be obliged.
its really amazing animation..specially I like when he jump on the chair and move towards the keyboard ...super timing ,grate job Rahul...keep it up Buddy...waiting for your next one
ReplyDeleteThank you much Buddy..:)
Deletegreat stuff rahul! You're selling the gag very well. Just the right amount of tension is built right before the payoff. I would say the rockets are not very clear. Have you considered machine guns? Or something else thats very clear to the audience? At first I didnt know what popped out. Maybe redesign the rockets to look more like missiles or machine guns? maybe a red spinning light like a siren or something that pops up a few frames before the missiles? this is a really good gag, and all the awesome elements are there. I think if you make the geometry that pops out more clear they are dangerous, you get more laughs out of it! Great work!
ReplyDeletesomething like this for inspiration:
http://acme.com/updates/archive/132.html
it a very clear drawing of a missile, and the audience knows right away that its dangerous, because they can clearly see the fins, warhead, and thruster.
Keep up the great work!
Hi Andy, I am so glad to have your comment again on my animation and thanks for appreciating my work. Your comments always boost my confidence. I'll make some modification on missile and weapon.
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Best Regards,
Rahul
Hey Rahul, nice piece of animation…..really you did great job. my suggestion for you.
ReplyDeleteYou can add one more cut to show missile very clear before ending action, also make right hand gesture
(00.14) much impressive.
hope its helpful to you.
Hi Arun ji, thanks for the appreciating my work. I'll make the changes u mentioned.
DeleteBest Regards,
Rahul
Wow Rahul what a great Stuff . There is nothing to say already you got the valuable comment from Andy and Arunji. from my side its Awesome work man ....... :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Buddy for the appreciating my work....like always...I m happy to see your comment...:)
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